Wednesday, 23 April 2014

First Draft Feedback + Agreed Changes




This is the First Draft of my video. I sent this to various people and showed it to people who are suppose to be me my target audience. The general feedback was as follows:


  • Needs more action/to be more eventful
  • Sound doesn't suit the picture
  • On-The-Train footage is too long
  • Canary Wharf Station Scene too long

Taking on board this feedback, I had to completely scrap the soundtrack that I made on Garageband and due to time restraint, find a royalty free downloadable version that I could apply to my video. 



Below is some of the feedback that I have taken on board, from various people collected in various formats;













































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