This is the First Draft of my video. I sent this to various people and showed it to people who are suppose to be me my target audience. The general feedback was as follows:
- Needs more action/to be more eventful
- Sound doesn't suit the picture
- On-The-Train footage is too long
- Canary Wharf Station Scene too long
Taking on board this feedback, I had to completely scrap the soundtrack that I made on Garageband and due to time restraint, find a royalty free downloadable version that I could apply to my video.
Below is some of the feedback that I have taken on board, from various people collected in various formats;
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